Monday, November 12, 2012

NARRATIVE WRITING

Kingston was so happy that it was Sports Day. Kingston Is a 12 year old boy who is not Athletic but he still enjoys his School Athletics Day. “ Oh man I cannot wait until  Athletics start.” Kingston said


“ OK, first the  12 year old boys will be going to  the 75 & 100 metre sprints along the side of the far end of the field.”  as Mr Jacobson said “Take your marks, get set, go!” I was thinking of how fast all the other competitors were . As soon as the 12 year old boys came to their last activity until lunchtime Kingston remembered something. It created a big Problem.

"Oh no I ate all my lunch at morning tea, so I am going to have to starve for the hole of lunchtime."As Kingston sat on the grass just waiting for the lunchtime bell to ring he heard a voice behind him. He had no idea who the mysterious person was, so he slowly turned around and guess who it was..... It was his Dad.

"Hey Kingston, do you have any lunch?" His dad asked. "No But can you please go and buy me some." Kingston replied. Kingston was so happy that his dad bought him some lunch, because he was terrified to experience being hungry for the hole lunchtime."Thanks dad." Kingston said as his dad left to go home.

Kingston had fun at his school Athletics and  enjoyed his lunch from his dad. Even though he is not an athletic person he did well in most of his activities.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Catch Of The Day (Kingston & Dillon) Buddy Writing

It was the perfect day to go out for fishing so Rex decided to pick his mates who are brothers, John and Cliff. “Yeeha, are you ready to go fishing boys?” “Yup!!! I sure am replied John.” Cliff said “ I'm not sure because this will be my first experience going fishing”.

“I think I got a big one boys, look at my line it looks like the fish is going to snap it” announced Cliff. “I don't think I can handle it and remember I'm only a beginner.” Cliff got pulled into the deep blue sea with the wild fish. “Don't panic” yelled Rex.

“Just stay in there and we'll send out a life ring to save you”. “ OK, but hurry” replied Cliff. Whoosh!!! and Rex sent out the life ring. The boys grabbed a hold of the rope and Rex counted to three “1 2 3 pull with all your strength. Since there were three boys fishing on the boat it was easier to pull Cliff in with the life ring.

The day was over and the boys were exhausted, so they rushed home and fell in there beds. Cliff had the catch of the day, they had the best breakfast ever.
                                  

Monday, November 5, 2012

(Kingston & Dillon) Partner Narrative


It was a dark cloudy day, and Jack & Joe was certain about it raining. They decided to go for a ride to Tachmanhow, It was only a 1 hour ride from there house.  
         
As they were driving Joe was curious of what the annoying noise was in their car.“Zzzzzzz, arrr it's a wasp get it out of my face”replied  Jack. “Stop the car” shouted Joe. BANG!!! hey had smashed into a Humongous tall tough tree. “Ouch” screamed Joe.

Joe said to Jack “hurry get out of the car its going to blow up”.  Jack said “you have to pull me out i’m injured”. “ OK give me your hand i'll pull you out”. 1, 2, 3 counted Joe and  he pulled Jack out using all his strength. “ ”Yes, yes i’m free,
thank you for helping me, now we better get out of here”.

Even though Jack and Joe lost their car they are lucky they didn't lose their lives. They went home and thought man we shouldn't have panicked.