Monday, May 3, 2010

Improvements to Project.

In our last project we sort of blew it because we didn't think about what we were doing and we didn't think about how our movie related to the theme "change" so we decided to improve our movie.

First of all this is our game plan.

The voice overs:Joshua.

Coming up with the slogan:Kingston.

Who is filming: Angela.

Actors,Joshua and Kingston.

So there is our game plan to try and make our movie more alive to our audience from the start to the end.

Here is our movie that we made and tell us what you think about it.


  1. Hi Kingston

    Your group movie was quite funny. It was a little like some of the ads on T.V. that try to persuade the viewers to buy their products. Reflecting on how you could make improvements is a good thing, so well done to your group. You could also try using a tripod to film or hold the camera as still as possible to get some good footage. Keep trying.

  2. Jordan said....

    Hi kingston

    You and your group have a great movie. next time you should try to use a tripod to get a clear image.Keep up the good work.


  3. Hi Kingston. I'm glad your team has begun a plan. A good place to start would be make sure you all know what your story is. This way you will be able to build your slogan, video and script around it. After watching your movie a couple of times I kind of got what you were trying to do as a group. I know this time with a more focused purpose, people will get your message the first time. You can do it!
    Mrs Tele'a


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